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It was today. That horrible day when all the dead walked, the sick, dark, and disgusting came out in droves.

Locker cleanout.

You grimaced. It was like a horror movie. Lockers held the weirdest crap, especially over the course of a year. That went double for you. You didn't even stop to think, you just threw random items in the locker when you stopped for books.

You sighed, (e/c) eyes staring sadly at the closed door of your locker. Waldo could've been in there for all you knew.  

"Hey (y/n)," your German classmate Ludwig said. "Vhy are you just standing zere?"

You looked at his locker in despair. All of   Ludwig's books were stacked neatly in order, his locker was meticulously clean. There wasn't a page out of place. Everyone knew that Ludwig was neat to the point of obsession due to his military upbringing. His locker proved that.

Being the smart boy that he is, Ludwig figured out your dilemma fairly quickly.
"Oh come on (y/n)! It can't be zat bad."
You opened your locker slowly and the playful glint in Ludwig's sky blue eyes faded. "Oh."

That was putting it mildly. Your locker was piled high with an insurmountable amount of random crap that ranged from clothes to abandoned lunches.
"Yep," you said."Narnia's in there somewhere."

It took a full five minutes for Ludwig to overcome his initial shock. "(Y/n)....vat zhe hell? How did it get zis bad?"

"Honestly," you said. "I don't know. Luddy," you pleaded. "Show me how to make it better."

He sighed. This was a lost cause. Your locker was beyond saving, but Ludwig didn't want to let you down. "Ja," he told you. "But it vill be difficult."

Your eyes filled with happy tears. Ludwig was actually going to help you. You weren't going to be stuck with the Everest of locker junk.  

~~~~~three Russia sized garbage bags later~~~~~

You laid on the tiled floor exhausted.  It took two hours, three garbage bags, and help from Feliciano and Kiku both.

"Vell," Ludwig sighed. "It is finished."

You smiled up at his tired, blue eyes. "Thank you Luddy." You threw your arms around his neck and gave him a hug.

Ludwig blushed and hugged you back. "Ja," he coughed. "But don't let it get this bad next time."

"Okay!"

However, what you didn't know was that Prussia was in the classroom taking bets. "Alright guys! Twenty buck says (y/n)'s locker stays clean a week!"
Hay! Another reader insert! This is came when I was looking for my locker this week ( I hardly ever use mine) Leave me a comment! Tell me what you think!
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:iconthe11thnightfall:
The11thNightfall Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD Sorry Gil, you're gonna lose that bet...
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kurino-sama-alpha Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014
*rummages through locker, trying to find something that isn't rotted or moldy or stinky. hand brushes up against some sharp, needle-like things. pulls hand back in surprise* ow! *peeks in again. reaches forward slowly. brushes fingers against cool, needles that give off a faint scent of pine under all the other crap* uh, Luddy?....*reaches further. fingers brush against a branch* Luddy....i think i found Narnia..........
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JadetheKidR9 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014   General Artist
Waldo could've been in there for all you knew. 
Me: -rummages around in locker until i feel something like hair- Ludwig! Get another garbage bag! -pulls on the hair and out comes :iconwaldoplz: -
:iconwaldoplz: : F*ck you! You gave away my hiding spot!! -runs out nearest window-
Me: Um... NEVER MIND LUDDY!! 
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oceanstar932 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013
very funny! i kept laughing! XD
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SaRaH-lAyToN Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Mines just about big enough for my motor bike helmet and that's it! XD no room for books in there!
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inkpumpkin Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I don't even know where my locker is this year.
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SaRaH-lAyToN Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
its a fight in my school for our lockers. If yiu can get one, then you're blinking lucky XD
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Dutchnyn Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I have the strange thing to put a book in my locker, for the whole year long. Really good story!
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AnimeGirl105 Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My reactions:
"It was today. That horrible day when all the dead walked, the sick, dark, and disgusting came out in droves." And I was like: Shit's 'bout to get serious! :iconseriousplz:

"Locker cleanout. " Then I was like: OMG WE'RE ALL GONNA DIE!! :icontableflipplz: (lol! XD)
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scrougeofares Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
I never put food in my locker but somehow there were many pieces of paper in there. Now, how did that happen? Good job on this story!
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Katniss-HP-Twilight Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013
Gilbert!!! lol. I have never opened my locker this year...
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:iconhetalialuvertimestwo:
I'm a neat-freak when it comes to lockers..... so yeah.....
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TwistedSirens Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
im the reader XD lol but my locker has no place for my bags.... XD
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CraftyRebecca Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013
I'm a Ludwig.

We had a locker cleanout a few months ago, but I had nothing to clean :dummy:

I can't stand a messy locker T.T
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FrenchLouie Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
This seems like something that would happen to me. Especially Gilbert's bet at the end.
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DJ-Sky-Storm-117 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe....My lockers big enough for two bodies.
I've tried it before....
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inkpumpkin Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
My locker can't even fit my backpack
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DJ-Sky-Storm-117 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oH thats so sad!!!
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Maxernest Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013   General Artist
ok one locker clean, now for my second kicker
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LightOfLaurelin Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
Lol... My locker's so small that I couldn't even fit my jacket in there if I wanted to... :I
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Iris-the--kitty Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
FOR NARNIA!
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Hetalia43v3r Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Pffft! My locker is a lost cause? Watch me clean it!
~two days latter~
I think I see the bottom! No wait that's a textbook...
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scrougeofares Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
I never really used my locker in high school either; but I was really surprised when I looked at other people's. Some had sandwiches in there that were becoming a science experiment (and worse).
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emolove590 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
FUCK GILBERT YOUR SO DEAD
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moot3100 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm really gonna sound like a noob when I say this but...Is Waldo from some anime or something? I've heard people making jokes about him before, but never knew who he was....XD Great Story (I can never get my locker organized...At least now I have Doitsu to help me :D)
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inkpumpkin Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
He's from a book called Where's Waldo? Waldo,a distinctively dressed man, as he sets off on "a world-wide hike". Waldo travels to everyday places –such as the beach, the ski slopes and the zoo. The book features 12 detailed 2-page illustrated spreads of the different locations. Somewhere amid the crowded scene is Waldo and readers are asked to scour the detailed illustrations to locate the lost traveler. Each scene is accompanied by a postcard to the reader from Waldo, who introduces the scene and comments on his travels.

Waldo sets out on his journey equipped with 12 items to help him on his travels. He carries a walking stick,kettle, mallet, cup, backpack, sleeping bag, binoculars, camera, snorkel, belt, bag and shovel. As Waldo journeys from location to location he loses one of these item, and asks the reader to locate the object left behind in each scene as well.
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moot3100 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, that makes since...XD So is that like the origin of all those spotting games? That's pretty cool!
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inkpumpkin Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah!
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DarknessOnMyEyes Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You lose, Gil~
Bitch please, it's not even two whole days =3=

*sighs* This would so happen to me... Too bad there isn't a Luddy, Feli or Kiku to help me out :iconsighingplz:
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Djcrazybanana Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
TO NARNIA~ prussia I'll tell you right know you just lost 20 bucks
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inkpumpkin Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Bwahahaha! Pay up bro
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Djcrazybanana Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
Ask slenderman for twenty bucks
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inkpumpkin Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconscaredplz: nevermind....I don't need it
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Djcrazybanana Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013
XD here yopu go *gives 20 bucks*
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SecretGermanyLover Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Mine is more like Ludwig's. One time some of my friends and I went up to Summerhaven and went hiking for about an hour then randomly screamed out FOR NARNIAAAAAA!!!!!!!!~ and then came back down because my mom was worried because she heard screaming. Soooooo frudgerfrudging fun!!!!!!!!~
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PotatoesLove Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
TO NARNIA! :iconawwyeahplz:
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menoux Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
LOL Narnia!:iconbiggrinfaceplz:
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rachael9989 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
haha this reminds me of last year when me and my friend shared a locker because she hated hers and we actually had to bring in separate bags to clear out all of our stuff :)
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frostedcranberries Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist
Lol. :iconus-xdplz: That is totally me. I am possibly one of the least organized people ever. Except that I don't leave food in there. X'D
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MurderScreamer Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Professional General Artist
This is SOO true...I had to help clean out my friend's locker...and I swear to god it took us a good 3 hours and a sh*t load of people...It was like A school affair XD
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Umbramoon Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
America's is worse. Lolz, this was hilarious!
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phoenixfirekid Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
that was funnny
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horsiefanatic Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i couldnt help myself, its so funny i especially love these parts:
"Narnia's in there somewhere."
and "Alright guys! Twenty buck says (y/n)'s locker stays clean a week!"
awesome jobs by the way
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inkpumpkin Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it
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horsiefanatic Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ur welcome
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